Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Show time

plan:
my favorite dance, shiny sunny colourful clothes
bold eyelines, make up, costumes, crowd,
friends, family, smiles, not smileing, actions,whats destracding me

Stroy:
Yeah!! today is our amazing bright bold and beautiful show that we have taken a really long time to learn.

My speical dance was our dance it was the best because of our costumes they sort of look like , shiny sunny colourful clothes.

There were over 800 people there and 1,200 eye at the most WOW!!

I felt so nevous when loud Te puawai was going on. Just when the curtian went up you could hear all the people cheering and clapping at you. It made you smile, and know that 1,200 eyes were staring at you.

I had forgot my hallowen clothes that night so i had to wear our class dance singlet that were as white as a ghost.

I knew today was the concert so I practice my very hard just to be perfect because TC said"if you make a mistake or do something silly it will stick out.

The whole show will hopefuly go well.

" Guys your up" Well that was TC calling us I beter scram because its our dance so see you after the show BYE!!

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Maths videos




I learnt simple strategy to work out how to answer the questions.
I think I did well in learning the questions and now knowing the
questions off by heart.
Next time I think I should use one or more strategy's to show how
I worked it out.

Monday, September 13, 2010

I think i learnt to use similes and onomatopoeia.
I think i did well in making my writing make sense
because im not very good at that.
My next step is to try to make my writing neater because
im not very good at that ether.

W.A.L.T:make tired writing come to life

my friends and me were playing a game of ball tag
and i was in.

Better piece of my writing when i have SPARKED it up

Yeah!!! Me and my idiotic friends were letting loose a game
of ball tag. The ball that we were playing with is blue bouncy
just like a ballon. I quickly ran after one of my idiodict friends because
I was in.

Sunday, September 12, 2010

my best visual lanuage


I learn to mix my colours and to take my time.
I think i did well with making my pictures relate to the topic.
I think next time i will relate my title to what the poem is.

Thursday, September 9, 2010

Spelling test


I think i did well but those words were really hard.
At first i thought the were easy but its just like you
cant judge a book by its cover.