my best description piece

This is my cross country piece of writing it is about when a girl hit me in the nose
I think that this is a good description because i used smiles.

I selected this piece because its bright bold and really colorful and i used the colors to make other colors like on the stars i made them orange. It seems to stand out and it seems to catch your eye.
by sophie

i think that next time i need to do more laps and run faster
and i need to pace my self. I put a lot of effort into running
i learnt that you need to keep your pace.