Wednesday, December 8, 2010
| Date | |||||
| I meet my deadlines | 2 | ||||
| I set challenges and mini comps if things get boring | 4 | ||||
| I organise and keep track of my equipment. | 3 | ||||
| I need nobody to remind me to behave or get back to work. | 4 | ||||
| I keep my eye on the prize | 4 | ||||
| I always have work to carry on with. | 4 | ||||
| Total | 21 | ||||
| Self Reflection / Goals | I am good at setting challenges but i need to improve on sticking with my dead lines and dont go onto something fun. |
lc 13
Wednesday, December 1, 2010
Athletics
We finally get to the track and all I concentrate on is how big that mat is for high jump because I think high jump is my strongest point for Athletics and this is the active I want to say I did that I jump over that bar.
We sit down and MR Mc starts to talk BLA bla bla bla bla..... that's all I hear because I just want to get on with it. Anyway! 9 year olds arrive at the big mat. We get split into to groups because we a great big group. Boys on one side girls on the other. Heaps of people pass now its my turn. The bar is only at 90cm but that's still high because the mats about 15cm so the bar is at 1meter 5. This is what we've been practicing at school but this seems higher.
I run so fast that I nearly fall over. I jump I hope a didn't knock the bar over. Everything looked smudge like an art piece my leando devinci but from an ants point of view. "MOVE I hear TC say but more politer that I just said . The bar Its up. I was so happy but I was more happy about that know other girls made it. I think I the best!
Thursday, November 4, 2010
Speech assessment
Speeches
Written and Oral Language
We are learning to:
Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately
Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically
Speech Topic:
| | Self Assessment from video | Speech in front of class | |
| Success Criteria: | |||
| Speech Writing | |||
| My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced | yes | yes | |
| The point I was making was easy to understand | yes | yes | |
| My speech contained research | yes | yes | |
| My speech had voice and was interesting | yes | yes | |
| My speech was in my words | yes | yes | |
| My big idea comes through strongly | yes | yes | |
| Presentation | |||
| I enunciated my words clearly | no | 1/2 | |
| Terminal consonants | | ||
| Ts and ds in the middles of words | | ||
| Swallowed my goobies first | | ||
| Seperated my words | | ||
| My voice was loud enough | yes | yes | |
| I learnt my speech off by heart | yes | yes | |
| I used expression in my voice | yes | yes | |
| I used enough volume to be heard by all | yes | yes | |
| I used eye-contact | yes | yes | |
| My speech was not too fast, not too slow | yes | yes | |
| My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes | no | no | |
| My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words | yes | yes | |
| Total: | 12 | 12 half | |
Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14
Self Assessment after Video
Self Assessment after Speech
S.R
My speech was the same as my pi I just need to speak louder but apart from that my speech was very interesting!!!!
Tuesday, November 2, 2010
Sunday, October 17, 2010
Thursday, October 14, 2010
pi assesment
PI Matrix
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
S.R.
next time I need to speak clearer and
also speak louder but apart from that mine pi
was great.
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Monday, October 11, 2010
Home fun %
is.....90% it is lower then my last% but
not a lot lower i am happy with my score
But next time I think I can do better.
term three goal
a bit to high for what i can achieve so next time i will set my goal
to what i can do!!!
Tuesday, September 21, 2010
Show time
my favorite dance, shiny sunny colourful clothes
bold eyelines, make up, costumes, crowd,
friends, family, smiles, not smileing, actions,whats destracding me
Stroy:
Yeah!! today is our amazing bright bold and beautiful show that we have taken a really long time to learn.
My speical dance was our dance it was the best because of our costumes they sort of look like , shiny sunny colourful clothes.
There were over 800 people there and 1,200 eye at the most WOW!!
I felt so nevous when loud Te puawai was going on. Just when the curtian went up you could hear all the people cheering and clapping at you. It made you smile, and know that 1,200 eyes were staring at you.
I had forgot my hallowen clothes that night so i had to wear our class dance singlet that were as white as a ghost.
I knew today was the concert so I practice my very hard just to be perfect because TC said"if you make a mistake or do something silly it will stick out.
The whole show will hopefuly go well.
" Guys your up" Well that was TC calling us I beter scram because its our dance so see you after the show BYE!!
Wednesday, September 15, 2010
Maths videos
I learnt simple strategy to work out how to answer the questions.
I think I did well in learning the questions and now knowing the
questions off by heart.
Next time I think I should use one or more strategy's to show how
I worked it out.
Tuesday, September 14, 2010
Monday, September 13, 2010
W.A.L.T:make tired writing come to life
and i was in.
Better piece of my writing when i have SPARKED it up
Yeah!!! Me and my idiotic friends were letting loose a game
of ball tag. The ball that we were playing with is blue bouncy
just like a ballon. I quickly ran after one of my idiodict friends because
I was in.
Sunday, September 12, 2010
my best visual lanuage
Thursday, September 9, 2010
Spelling test
Sunday, September 5, 2010
free writting
my mums boyfriends brother and his wife live in
Christchurch
and the other day they brought a big flat screen TV.
When the earthquake happened there TV feel
off the shelf and broke. There house wasn't
damaged as like every other houses in Christchurch
but there house wasnt perfect . The earthquake measured up to 7.4 on the scale WOW!!!!!
they also had heaps of after shocks. They had one when the news was interviewing a man.
by Sophie
Thursday, September 2, 2010
My fitness chart
Sunday, August 29, 2010
Thursday, August 5, 2010
Thursday, July 29, 2010
pi matrix
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
Wednesday, July 28, 2010
Term 3 Goal
Thursday, July 22, 2010
Wednesday, July 21, 2010
My home fun percent
Tuesday, July 20, 2010
term 2 goal assessment
i still had to find out what somethings and how to do them like setting
up blogs so next time i will work harder at my goal and will ask
people for help if i have to.
Wednesday, June 30, 2010
Tuesday, June 22, 2010
my best description piece
Sunday, June 20, 2010
Thursday, June 3, 2010
Sunday, May 30, 2010
Thursday, May 27, 2010
Monday, May 24, 2010
Monday, May 17, 2010
Sunday, April 25, 2010
Thursday, April 22, 2010
My homefun percentage page
twenty nine pages right so my final score is 92% I think i could do better
by taking my home fun book home and to do some work for the next
day instead of playing games to achieve and make my 92% higher.
Wednesday, April 21, 2010
that was a great P.I. You put a lot of time and effort. Your dad's hot rod was awesome!!!!!!!!!!! Hadley,Corbin,Alan and Caleb
Thanks Sophie for showing us your dads car. It was a brilliant presentation. Plus we loved the car!!! Oliver, Harrison, Chaz
your P.I was awsome all the cars you shared with us was awsome and WHAT A GOOD CHOICE and your dads hotrod was awsome congrats sophie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! caelum,mike,kale
We really enjoyed your PI and all the detail you put in! Next time though speak a bit more clearly and louder, But anyway cool Hotrod and great PI! Lucy, Maddy, Grace, Zia
maybe you should try shrotning it.speak a bit louder, but your dads hot rod was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aidan, Thomas
i think sophie did well because she spoke clearly and her dad even brought his car!!! I think sophie did well because her dad brought his car and the car was AWESOME. Hannah, Linda , Emma and natalya
We thought that was so cool! We really liked how you got your dad to come in and show us the hot rod! Nat,Kelly,Libby,kate and britt
we really enjoyed your p.i because you showed us a real hot rood and you gave us lots of infermation!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sara,Alana
My self assessment
I think i could do better by speaking clearly and doing
more pictures on a power point to make
the our dense more interest in the power point.
Wednesday, March 31, 2010
maths
my best piece of writing

This is my best piece of writing it is about my cool camp leader it is my
draft of his camp thank you letter. I think i used capital letters after fullstops
and i used comers when i needed to.I used fullstops after i finished a sentience and i
some times link in my writing. I some times put tittles on my work if i need to and
i say who its from if its a letter.
Tuesday, March 30, 2010
My Best Visual Language
This is my best piece of visual language i think i used bright colors andmy border relates to the topic. My tittle relates to my picture and i used block lettering on my tittle to. My pictures relate to the topic and I added details to my pictures. Also i colored the same way. I have very little white



















