Wednesday, December 8, 2010

Date



I meet my deadlines
2


I set challenges and mini comps if things get boring
4



I organise and keep track of my equipment.
3



I need nobody to remind me to behave or get back to work.
4




I keep my eye on the prize
4




I always have work to carry on with.
4



Total
21



Self Reflection / Goals
I am good at setting challenges but i need to improve on sticking with my dead lines and dont go onto something fun.





I like this piece because its funny and its also
is a great poem. This is my favorite piece for term 4.

lc 13

Bang I knock down the door but not for the last. My time at riverdale school has been unbelievable in lc13 . When I walked in the smell was just great and I cant forget Tc was even great even though I hadn't meet her yet apart from in the play grounds. QUIDADGE!!! the first time me and Sara opened we didn't expect the class to be so excited about quidadge but who wouldn't be excited about quidage come on that's crazy. Its been a great year but sadly it has to come to a end for the year sixes but hopefully another year for me with TC. I loved how the classroom contacted with TC. I liked how TC took us out for heaps of games like king dodge. I loved qzealand!!!!!!!!!

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Athletics

Its a nice hot day today but there's no time for relaxing at home ." Bang"! I can already hear the clappers in my mind. Owww...........what people will say when I knock over the bar for high jump.

We finally get to the track and all I concentrate on is how big that mat is for high jump because I think high jump is my strongest point for Athletics and this is the active I want to say I did that I jump over that bar.

We sit down and MR Mc starts to talk BLA bla bla bla bla..... that's all I hear because I just want to get on with it. Anyway! 9 year olds arrive at the big mat. We get split into to groups because we a great big group. Boys on one side girls on the other. Heaps of people pass now its my turn. The bar is only at 90cm but that's still high because the mats about 15cm so the bar is at 1meter 5. This is what we've been practicing at school but this seems higher.

I run so fast that I nearly fall over. I jump I hope a didn't knock the bar over. Everything looked smudge like an art piece my leando devinci but from an ants point of view. "MOVE I hear TC say but more politer that I just said . The bar Its up. I was so happy but I was more happy about that know other girls made it. I think I the best!

Thursday, November 4, 2010

Speech assessment

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

* Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

* Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic:


Self Assessment from video

Speech in front of class

Success Criteria:

Speech Writing

My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced

yes

yes

The point I was making was easy to understand

yes

yes

My speech contained research

yes

yes

My speech had voice and was interesting

yes

yes

My speech was in my words

yes

yes

My big idea comes through strongly

yes

yes

Presentation

I enunciated my words clearly

no

1/2

Terminal consonants


Ts and ds in the middles of words


Swallowed my goobies first


Seperated my words


My voice was loud enough

yes

yes

I learnt my speech off by heart

yes

yes

I used expression in my voice

yes

yes

I used enough volume to be heard by all

yes

yes

I used eye-contact

yes

yes

My speech was not too fast, not too slow

yes

yes

My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes

no

no

My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words

yes

yes

Total:

12

12 half

Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Self Assessment after Speech

S.R

My speech was the same as my pi I just need to speak louder but apart from that my speech was very interesting!!!!


Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Sunday, October 17, 2010

Thursday, October 14, 2010

pi assesment

PI Matrix


 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear
S.R.
next time I need to speak clearer and
also speak louder but apart from that mine pi
was great.

Monday, October 11, 2010

Home fun %

My home fun %
is.....90% it is lower then my last% but
not a lot lower i am happy with my score
But next time I think I can do better.

term three goal

I did not achieve my goal because i think i set my goal
a bit to high for what i can achieve so next time i will set my goal
to what i can do!!!

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Show time

plan:
my favorite dance, shiny sunny colourful clothes
bold eyelines, make up, costumes, crowd,
friends, family, smiles, not smileing, actions,whats destracding me

Stroy:
Yeah!! today is our amazing bright bold and beautiful show that we have taken a really long time to learn.

My speical dance was our dance it was the best because of our costumes they sort of look like , shiny sunny colourful clothes.

There were over 800 people there and 1,200 eye at the most WOW!!

I felt so nevous when loud Te puawai was going on. Just when the curtian went up you could hear all the people cheering and clapping at you. It made you smile, and know that 1,200 eyes were staring at you.

I had forgot my hallowen clothes that night so i had to wear our class dance singlet that were as white as a ghost.

I knew today was the concert so I practice my very hard just to be perfect because TC said"if you make a mistake or do something silly it will stick out.

The whole show will hopefuly go well.

" Guys your up" Well that was TC calling us I beter scram because its our dance so see you after the show BYE!!

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Maths videos




I learnt simple strategy to work out how to answer the questions.
I think I did well in learning the questions and now knowing the
questions off by heart.
Next time I think I should use one or more strategy's to show how
I worked it out.

Monday, September 13, 2010

I think i learnt to use similes and onomatopoeia.
I think i did well in making my writing make sense
because im not very good at that.
My next step is to try to make my writing neater because
im not very good at that ether.

W.A.L.T:make tired writing come to life

my friends and me were playing a game of ball tag
and i was in.

Better piece of my writing when i have SPARKED it up

Yeah!!! Me and my idiotic friends were letting loose a game
of ball tag. The ball that we were playing with is blue bouncy
just like a ballon. I quickly ran after one of my idiodict friends because
I was in.

Sunday, September 12, 2010

my best visual lanuage


I learn to mix my colours and to take my time.
I think i did well with making my pictures relate to the topic.
I think next time i will relate my title to what the poem is.

Thursday, September 9, 2010

Spelling test


I think i did well but those words were really hard.
At first i thought the were easy but its just like you
cant judge a book by its cover.

Sunday, September 5, 2010

free writting

Christchurch earthquake I'm sure you have heard of it
my mums boyfriends brother and his wife live in
Christchurch
and the other day they brought a big flat screen TV.
When the earthquake happened there TV feel
off the shelf and broke. There house wasn't
damaged as like every other houses in Christchurch
but there house wasnt perfect . The earthquake measured up to 7.4 on the scale WOW!!!!!
they also had heaps of after shocks. They had one when the news was interviewing a man.
by Sophie

Thursday, September 2, 2010

My fitness chart

i think i did well but i could have tried harder but i still tried my best
i think that the second week we did fitness i got my best scores
my favorite one was the soccer juggling.

Sunday, August 29, 2010

Thursday, July 29, 2010

pi matrix

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog
Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Term 3 Goal

i want to achieve my goal so i have come up with three answers
to achieve my goal.
1 Ask for help if needed
2 learning a question every night
3 on line games like tut pup.
these are three ways that i want to achieve my goal.

Thursday, July 22, 2010

Wednesday, July 21, 2010

My home fun percent

88%
I think that i did well but i think that i didn't do better
than last time so next time i will improve in my home work
i am happy that i didn't get under 60 yeah.

Tuesday, July 20, 2010

term 2 goal assessment

My goal is i want to have more knowledge about computers.i think that i was so close to completeing my goal but
i still had to find out what somethings and how to do them like setting
up blogs so next time i will work harder at my goal and will ask
people for help if i have to.

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

my best description piece

This is my cross country piece of writing it is about when a girl hit me in the nose
I think that this is a good description because i used smiles.

Sunday, June 20, 2010

I selected this piece because its bright bold and really colorful and i used the colors to make other colors like on the stars i made them orange. It seems to stand out and it seems to catch your eye.
by sophie

Thursday, June 3, 2010


i think that next time i need to do more laps and run faster
and i need to pace my self. I put a lot of effort into running
i learnt that you need to keep your pace.

Thursday, May 27, 2010

Monday, May 24, 2010

Monday, May 17, 2010

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

lots of hard questions and i think i did well because thats a harder
stage so it was very hard.

Sunday, April 25, 2010

Thursday, April 22, 2010

My homefun percentage page

I did thirty one pages for my home fun book and I got
twenty nine pages right so my final score is 92% I think i could do better
by taking my home fun book home and to do some work for the next
day instead of playing games to achieve and make my 92% higher.

Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Outstanding first PI, Sophie. You have a lot of knowledge of your topic and you shared it in a really interesting way with us. I've never known of, or been interested in hotrods, but now I am! Now I can see why people get so interested in them. I like the way your slide pictures were automatic. My suggestion for improvement is that you work on speaking clearly and more slowly and with more volume. Fantastic work, Sophie. TC
that was a great P.I. You put a lot of time and effort. Your dad's hot rod was awesome!!!!!!!!!!! Hadley,Corbin,Alan and Caleb
Thanks Sophie for showing us your dads car. It was a brilliant presentation. Plus we loved the car!!! Oliver, Harrison, Chaz
your P.I was awsome all the cars you shared with us was awsome and WHAT A GOOD CHOICE and your dads hotrod was awsome congrats sophie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! caelum,mike,kale
We really enjoyed your PI and all the detail you put in! Next time though speak a bit more clearly and louder, But anyway cool Hotrod and great PI! Lucy, Maddy, Grace, Zia
maybe you should try shrotning it.speak a bit louder, but your dads hot rod was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aidan, Thomas
i think sophie did well because she spoke clearly and her dad even brought his car!!! I think sophie did well because her dad brought his car and the car was AWESOME. Hannah, Linda , Emma and natalya
We thought that was so cool! We really liked how you got your dad to come in and show us the hot rod! Nat,Kelly,Libby,kate and britt
we really enjoyed your p.i because you showed us a real hot rood and you gave us lots of infermation!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sara,Alana
My self assessment
I think i could do better by speaking clearly and doing
more pictures on a power point to make
the our dense more interest in the power point.
https://spreadsheets.google.com/ccc?key=0AjqDA5h1pzIUdF9DMWF1SXNjMXpaaXk1dkpCVUpsUWc&hl=en
https://spreadsheets.google.com/ccc?key=0AjqDA5h1pzIUdF9DMWF1SXNjMXpaaXk1dkpCVUpsUWc&hl=en

Wednesday, March 31, 2010

maths

This is me using my strategies as good as i can possible as i can and some times i need help with my maths and for this lot of math i did need some help.The questions for this maths were 59 +24 and the other question is 84-38=46. I think i did lots of ways to try and get the answer i was creative .

my best piece of writing


This is my best piece of writing it is about my cool camp leader it is my
draft of his camp thank you letter. I think i used capital letters after fullstops
and i used comers when i needed to.I used fullstops after i finished a sentience and i
some times link in my writing. I some times put tittles on my work if i need to and
i say who its from if its a letter.

Tuesday, March 30, 2010

My Best Visual Language

This is my best piece of visual language i think i used bright colors and
my border relates to the topic. My tittle relates to my picture and i used block lettering on my tittle to. My pictures relate to the topic and I added details to my pictures. Also i colored the same way. I have very little white

Monday, March 29, 2010

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

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