Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Outstanding first PI, Sophie. You have a lot of knowledge of your topic and you shared it in a really interesting way with us. I've never known of, or been interested in hotrods, but now I am! Now I can see why people get so interested in them. I like the way your slide pictures were automatic. My suggestion for improvement is that you work on speaking clearly and more slowly and with more volume. Fantastic work, Sophie. TC
that was a great P.I. You put a lot of time and effort. Your dad's hot rod was awesome!!!!!!!!!!! Hadley,Corbin,Alan and Caleb
Thanks Sophie for showing us your dads car. It was a brilliant presentation. Plus we loved the car!!! Oliver, Harrison, Chaz
your P.I was awsome all the cars you shared with us was awsome and WHAT A GOOD CHOICE and your dads hotrod was awsome congrats sophie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! caelum,mike,kale
We really enjoyed your PI and all the detail you put in! Next time though speak a bit more clearly and louder, But anyway cool Hotrod and great PI! Lucy, Maddy, Grace, Zia
maybe you should try shrotning it.speak a bit louder, but your dads hot rod was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aidan, Thomas
i think sophie did well because she spoke clearly and her dad even brought his car!!! I think sophie did well because her dad brought his car and the car was AWESOME. Hannah, Linda , Emma and natalya
We thought that was so cool! We really liked how you got your dad to come in and show us the hot rod! Nat,Kelly,Libby,kate and britt
we really enjoyed your p.i because you showed us a real hot rood and you gave us lots of infermation!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sara,Alana
My self assessment
I think i could do better by speaking clearly and doing
more pictures on a power point to make
the our dense more interest in the power point.

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