Monday, September 13, 2010

I think i learnt to use similes and onomatopoeia.
I think i did well in making my writing make sense
because im not very good at that.
My next step is to try to make my writing neater because
im not very good at that ether.

2 comments:

  1. cool you have lots of great words i really like the part when you said he made it a great camp that was nice and sweet
    grace

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  2. where is the title? anyway interesting writing

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