Really interesting topic, Soph. i love the way you have recorded your voice, but I don't know why you need to have all those words you've on the screen as well. Maybe you could have used pictures to accompany your voice. You had a great structure to your PI. There was plenty of variety. Your research was sound. I thought the way you got peoples' opinions was clever. Your conclusion tied it together really well, it was well thought through and you used Level 4 writing! The other thing I loved was your cleverness in having some really scary bits,but leaving us feeling not scared! You're a wise girl, Soph.
Great job soap.it was good that you used sound recordings so you didn't have to read it out now.But next time you should have some more pictures.But we still dont believe in ghosts
Really interesting topic, Soph. i love the way you have recorded your voice, but I don't know why you need to have all those words you've on the screen as well. Maybe you could have used pictures to accompany your voice. You had a great structure to your PI. There was plenty of variety. Your research was sound. I thought the way you got peoples' opinions was clever. Your conclusion tied it together really well, it was well thought through and you used Level 4 writing! The other thing I loved was your cleverness in having some really scary bits,but leaving us feeling not scared! You're a wise girl, Soph.
ReplyDeletegreat P.I. next time you could do your P.I. in a booklet or board and watch out for those ghosts
ReplyDeletejosh sam
good pi soph tell the ghost it can come back anytime.
ReplyDeleteFrom Cam & Ferg
Great P.I soap that is one of the best P.Is I have ever seen I think ther was nothing wrong with it.
ReplyDeleteFrom Ty Thor
Great job soap.it was good that you used sound recordings so you didn't have to read it out now.But next time you should have some more pictures.But we still dont believe in ghosts
ReplyDeleteNatalya and Jaime
Nice P.I. I liked how you had voice recording and nice touch with the ghost.
ReplyDeleteNext time maybe have the correct peoples
Great P.I Soap
ReplyDeleteWith your recordings you spoke loud and clear next time: more pictures please and thankyou
Alana. Bex and Linda
awsome pi sophie next time have more photos.
ReplyDeleteform aidan
loved the end and the voice resounding maybe have some more pic
ReplyDeleteGreat P.I Sophie. We think everyone loved the ghost coming in from the door which is odd.
ReplyDeleteNext time you should have more pics
From Cam & Ferg