What an interesting way of doing a food related PI Sophie! I mean not many people would get different sherbet tasting sugar type things and then put people into groups to taste! I think that was a great idea!
Perhaps you should not have voiceovered it- there wasn't a great deal of words being spoken on the voiceover what I remember. However I do know that you will not be doing another PI so I suppose it dosen't really matter about this. Oh well at Intermediate you will probably do some sort of project!! By the way well done on the election.
Well done Soap. What you did well: You spoke loud and clear on the over voice.You did something different that other people wouldn't of even thought of,You did a fantastic P.I,You did a voice over,You had lots of pictures,You didn't have writing on the screen and you didn't speak about it.
What could you do better next time: You could have other people talking in your family about how that made then have that expression,You could already have your P.I ready to go before the bell rings.
Well done on another good PI, Sophie. I know it was frustrating that it took time to get the technology working properly and it was a very difficult time to be scheduled - right before the election vote count! While I don't think it was your very best investigation, it was still very well put together and an interesting topic.
Great PI Sophie You spoke loud and clear and your voiceover was really clear. We can't think of ANYTHING that you could do better. You had a very goo PI -Hannah, Bex and Cindy
great pi soph I liked it how you had the voice overs andyou spoke really well in them next time mabey you could get your family to speak on the voice overs saying things like did it give you a energy boost apart from that it was a great Pi!!!!!! SARA!!!!!!!!!!
What an interesting way of doing a food related PI Sophie! I mean not many people would get different sherbet tasting sugar type things and then put people into groups to taste! I think that was a great idea!
ReplyDeletePerhaps you should not have voiceovered it- there wasn't a great deal of words being spoken on the voiceover what I remember. However I do know that you will not be doing another PI so I suppose it dosen't really matter about this. Oh well at Intermediate you will probably do some sort of project!! By the way well done on the election.
Jam
Good P.I Sophie it was good that you had done voiceovers. Next time you could make the voice overs clearer
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Well done Soap.
ReplyDeleteWhat you did well:
You spoke loud and clear on the over voice.You did something different that other people wouldn't of even thought of,You did a fantastic P.I,You did a voice over,You had lots of pictures,You didn't have writing on the screen and you didn't speak about it.
What could you do better next time:
You could have other people talking in your family about how that made then have that expression,You could already have your P.I ready to go before the bell rings.
Well done on another good PI, Sophie. I know it was frustrating that it took time to get the technology working properly and it was a very difficult time to be scheduled - right before the election vote count! While I don't think it was your very best investigation, it was still very well put together and an interesting topic.
ReplyDeleteGreat PI Sophie
ReplyDeleteYou spoke loud and clear and your voiceover was really clear. We can't think of ANYTHING that you could do better. You had a very goo PI
-Hannah, Bex and Cindy
great pi it was nice next time you sould not have the speaking loud.it was really good that you let us try one of the types
ReplyDeletegreaty pi you spoke clerly but next time speak more louder
ReplyDeletefrom aidan
Great PI Sophie.
ReplyDeleteYou spock nice and clear but next time you could spek a bit louder.
great pi soph I liked it how you had the voice overs andyou spoke really well in them next time mabey you could get your family to speak on the voice overs saying things like did it give you a energy boost apart from that it was a great Pi!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteSARA!!!!!!!!!!