my best piece of writing term 3

I think i learnt to use my voice and inspire people to write with voice
I think i did well with using neat writing an to use similes.
Next time i want to do better in making my writing make sense.

I think i learnt to use similes and onomatopoeia.
I think i did well in making my writing make sense
because im not very good at that.
My next step is to try to make my writing neater because
im not very good at that ether.

W.A.L.T:make tired writing come to life

my friends and me were playing a game of ball tag
and i was in.

Better piece of my writing when i have SPARKED it up

Yeah!!! Me and my idiotic friends were letting loose a game
of ball tag. The ball that we were playing with is blue bouncy
just like a ballon. I quickly ran after one of my idiodict friends because
I was in.

my best visual lanuage

I learn to mix my colours and to take my time.
I think i did well with making my pictures relate to the topic.
I think next time i will relate my title to what the poem is.

Spelling test

I think i did well but those words were really hard.
At first i thought the were easy but its just like you
cant judge a book by its cover.

free writting

Christchurch earthquake I'm sure you have heard of it
my mums boyfriends brother and his wife live in
Christchurch
and the other day they brought a big flat screen TV.
When the earthquake happened there TV feel
off the shelf and broke. There house wasn't
damaged as like every other houses in Christchurch
but there house wasnt perfect . The earthquake measured up to 7.4 on the scale WOW!!!!!
they also had heaps of after shocks. They had one when the news was interviewing a man.
by Sophie

My fitness chart

i think i did well but i could have tried harder but i still tried my best
i think that the second week we did fitness i got my best scores
my favorite one was the soccer juggling.